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Clam
09-27-2008, 03:50 PM
On my free site: www.iloveyurizan.com

TIA

the Shemp
09-27-2008, 04:04 PM
i thought it looked very slick :)

A.J. Angel
09-27-2008, 04:09 PM
Ditto Shemp! Looks very slick to me as well! Did you do all the design yourself? :)

Panky
09-27-2008, 04:16 PM
Whatever keyword or key phrase you are trying to target, incorporate that into your warning text.

Each page must have a title and that title must be on every page of the site.

Check your spelling.

The freesite construction is:
Warning page
Ads page with links to galleries
Gallery 1
Gallery 2

http://www.iloveyurizan.com/yurizan.html
The text is fine, but don't link the entire paragraph of text. Make the "Click here now" a font size larger and a contrasting color so the link pops. Also, clearly define where that link leads to so as to avoid any perception of a blind link.

You are giving away a hell of a lot of content on that site. Instead of creating individual gallery pages for each image and video, choose 1 image and 1 video from the content selection you have and create 1 gallery page for each. You can choose all pics, all vids, or create a hybrid. Right now, you could build multiple freesites with all the content you are using for just one freesite.

On the gallery pages, talk to the surfer. Don't just rely on a banner to do your selling. Whenever you use banners or buttons, always include text with them.

Text on freesites is very important. Spiders love text and freesite sales will come from indexed sites. You can very easily generate freesite sales for some time to come from indexed freesites.

Clam
09-27-2008, 04:34 PM
Thanks, guys. I appreciate the compliments. Yes, AJ, I did the design myself. I'm getting better at it, I think. :)

Thanks for the feedback, Panky. I'll be taking a closer look at the things you mentioned...

Foker
09-27-2008, 06:06 PM
Your model is TOP 10 BB
but I think you should make some changes to design
also I cant see keywords is page source code

Clam
09-27-2008, 07:00 PM
Your model is TOP 10 BB
but I think you should make some changes to design
also I cant see keywords is page source code

What 'changes to design' would you recommend?

lazzlo
09-27-2008, 08:02 PM
nice clamy!

drunken
09-27-2008, 08:37 PM
great comments by panky.

movies load fast must be a good server

and the model is hot as hell

i should get into freesites.... :(

kaz
09-27-2008, 10:41 PM
Being a big breast lover myself, it looks great, content wise and aesthetically

wachia
09-28-2008, 12:31 AM
The site is great, really like your main page. Should make some sales from that.

wachia
09-28-2008, 12:51 AM
okay I have to say something....

You shouldn't mix movie and picture galleries on a site. Most places won't accept this. You have greenguy on there if you go look at his rules, you will see that listed there.

You might also want to check out about warning pages too. I'm not real sure about that one but you might want to look into that.

the design is awesome though :)

andrewst
09-28-2008, 01:44 AM
I love her Boobies
Good luck with a third party exit like that
They were sending to trogans and warez not so long ago
Write up on gg forum look up warningpages.com
Google will love you for the google link

NY Jester
09-28-2008, 03:37 AM
Let me first say the site looks great. However, if your submitting a "free site" you just wasted a domain on it...free sites are a 4 page mini site that is usually done within a directory of a main 1st level domain.

So unless you want to spend thousands on new domains, Id take into consideration, the fact that hundreds of free sites can be housed on one single domain.

Examples:

http://www.jesterssecretstash.com/fs/908/chubbymilfnympho/
http://www.jesterssecretstash.com/fs/908/pornstarbaby/
http://www.jesterssecretstash.com/fs/908/simplystockings/

I personally wouldnt list it simply for the fact that I know it will be changed once the mistake has been discovered and corrected.

dimitar
09-28-2008, 03:26 PM
Not bad but why you put that on the root folder... no need for that

digifan
09-28-2008, 03:42 PM
Very nice!