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Czarina
08-21-2008, 03:02 PM
hi guys.
I just finished designing the 1st page of the second tour of DCupMilfs.com and I wanted to run it by a knowledgeable group. Can you give me your input on it?

http://dcupcash.com/dcupmilfs/dcupmilfs-red.jpg

Thanks!
Czarina

Czarina
08-21-2008, 03:04 PM
by the way, it will have 3 main pages plus the join, and it will NOT be reality style :)

MP
08-21-2008, 03:15 PM
hi guys.
I just finished designing the 1st page of the second tour of DCupMilfs.com and I wanted to run it by a knowledgeable group. Can you give me your input on it?

http://dcupcash.com/dcupmilfs/dcupmilfs-red.jpg

Thanks!
CzarinaFixed the red x for ya :)

MP
08-21-2008, 03:15 PM
Opps look like you fixed it!

A.J. Angel
08-21-2008, 03:17 PM
Looks nice to me! Too many girls stacked up though but that's just my opinion though! I do like the fact that there's plenty of boobies. :)

Thomas1007
08-21-2008, 03:22 PM
yup looks good to me as well.
ya gotta like titties.
:woot:

Czarina
08-21-2008, 07:11 PM
thank you guys!
I guess I'll keep the style then :)

Tim
08-22-2008, 07:39 AM
Looks very nice!

Cyndalie
08-22-2008, 11:40 AM
I don't like the Logo. Other than that it looks good.

KRM
08-22-2008, 11:42 AM
I agree with cyn about the logo, You really need something to make it pop and a nice logo would do that as I think the rest of it is fine

kaz
08-22-2008, 06:39 PM
why did you cut that poor girl's face off? I realize you're probably trying to focus more on her breasts, but it looks funny like it is now. Maybe either zoom out and include her face, or zoom in and focus more on her breasts...

Angel R.
08-22-2008, 06:59 PM
You could try a bit yellowish gradient for the logo. I would also change the font that you used for the text below it.
Other than that it looks nice :)

that cut off pic looks like a video spot to me.