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MarkTiarra
12-14-2006, 11:20 PM
Hey guys... everyone here is always so cool to me which I really appreciate so I wanted to post here about something I'm going to do next week and get opinions on if the sales page for is working for you or if it leaves you with more questions and such.

http://www.interactiveparadigmstudios.com/membersitegenie/

I appreciate anyone taking the time to have a look and give an opinion.

jact
12-14-2006, 11:23 PM
An error has occurred
Product does not exist! At least one of the requested products does not exist.

:jact:

Bastard.

I'll hit you up on ICQ and we can discuss my input.

jact
12-14-2006, 11:27 PM
That is, if you'll reply to me. :(

MarkTiarra
12-14-2006, 11:28 PM
I am launching ICQ now. I'm not selling the product yet. I just wanted to get opinions on the sales text first. =] Thanks for looking though!

PMC
12-15-2006, 12:17 AM
looks really good, its not spammy looking.

jact
12-15-2006, 12:18 AM
I am launching ICQ now. I'm not selling the product yet. I just wanted to get opinions on the sales text first. =] Thanks for looking though!

I knew you didn't love me anymore :(

MarkTiarra
12-15-2006, 12:34 AM
I knew you didn't love me anymore :(

It's always been about lust. You know I'm a whore!

MarkTiarra
12-15-2006, 12:35 AM
looks really good, its not spammy looking.

Thanks senor.

Capt. 'rold
12-15-2006, 08:34 AM
Looks good. Only thing I would change is using the actual word for percentage, rather than the symbol.

Cynthiab
12-15-2006, 03:53 PM
It's clear and easy to understand but that first line kinda bothers me and I'm not sure why. Have you been thinking of opening a paysite makes sense but the, have you been running one is sort of convoluted and doesn't seem to fit with what you're selling.

I'd hit with newbies looking to open and site and maybe close with a note that the product would also be helpful to current owners looking to up their bottom line.